Assignment 1: Response to Feedback

Below is my response to the feedback given to me by my tutor, Jayne Taylor, for my submission of Assignment 1 – The Square Mile

Here is the feedback: fip-a1-feedback

“You’re interested in the management of Minsmere but I felt like a visitor”

I actually wasn’t surprised by this reaction from Jayne. While it wasn’t at the forefront of my consciousness I did want to produce an attractive series of images. I have a close and personal relationship with Minsmere as a location which is different metaphysically from Minsmere the RSPB reserve. As I have a great fondness for the place I think it was instinctive that I would wish to represent it well, perhaps even promoting it at the same time.

The sequence of images 1

Of course! Why didn’t I see it? Even after I named it ‘somewhere to rest’ the penny didn’t drop. Yes, the photograph of the bench needs to be located elsewhere and not at the beginning. Though I haven’t mentioned this in my written account for Assignment 1 the sequence of images represent a journey made through the reserve starting at an access point close to the bench and ending amongst the sand dunes by the sea. This is in keeping with a sense of honesty that can preoccupy my approach to taking photographs. When I was young I was very influenced by Henri Cartier-Bresson so, for example, I invariably compose in the viewfinder and feel that cropping is a bit of a cheat. And it is this that has stopped me in the past from fully embracing the postproduction aspects of digital photography. That said the FiP is making me re-evaluate some these long held views and it hasn’t been a struggle to loosen some of them off.

The sequence of images 2

Again, I had tied myself down by insisting that conventional landscape would not be a feature of the sequence. Jayne wasn’t alone in commenting on this as some of the peer feedback I received also made similar remarks.

So, following Jayne’s suggestion I have added to the sequence a view over what is known as ‘the scrape’ and titled it ‘The Destination’. Moreover, I have moved the opening image ‘Somewhere to Rest’ further down in the sequence. I replaced it with ‘Walk Over water’. This quite striking composition of a wooded walkway seems fitting for an open image. It draws the viewer into both the image and the sequence and metaphorically into the reserve itself.

A more critical response to the work of Dan Holdsworth

I had actually said more about Holdsworth in my scan of the ‘mind map’ than I’d formally written in my assignment. A quote from Wikipedia states that Holdsworth’s work is characterised by “…radical abstractions in geography”. And I think it is this that is stopping from me really appreciating his work. Earlier I mentioned my preoccupation with ‘honesty’ in photography and I feel his artifice in representing landscape is troubling for me. I know the lengthy exposures needed at night renders them this way but the artificiality that comes with them plays on the sense of honesty that I look for in this kind of work.

His landscapes however, are less troubling than those night-time images of empty car parks and roads. The stillness and silence is tangible and, like sitting alone in a room I need to have something going on in the background. I’d play some music or put on radio 4 and likewise in Holdsworth’s car park I long to see a discarded kebab wrapper. Otherwise, the sterility in these images looks too sinister for my liking.

Despite what I said above I’ll place one caveat in my critique of his work and that is because I’ve not seem the real images. My only exposure to Holdsworth’s work is through the computer screen and with this comes the limitations of size and tonal range of a compressed file. The image below shows his work in a gallery space and is clear he produces some very large images.


Notwithstanding my earlier comments about abstracted geography and the need for litter to bring some varitas to an otherwise dystopian urban landscape, I do wonder how I would react to seeing the images on a gallery wall. I raise this question because many years ago on a visit to the Birmingham Museum and Art Gallery I saw their Pre-Raphaelite collection. While I was aware of the Pre-Raphaelite Brotherhood their work had never really ‘caught my eye’; that was until I confronted them in a gallery. The depth and colour and use of light never seem to come across on the printed page and I wonder if something similar could happen upon seeing Holdsworth’s work in an appropriate setting.


Assignment One: Square Mile


What was your initial response to the brief and what ideas did you have for how to complete it?

I have covered this in more detail in a reflective entry in my learning log. To sum up, the Royal Society for the Protection of Birds reserve at Minsmere was an obvious Square Mile for me. The FiP materials asks us to consider an urban or natural environment and while mine is a natural one it is a managed wild habitat and not an untouched wilderness. In particular the RSPB promotes the reserve as a visitor attraction in order to raise financial income and promote its work as a conservation pressure group. With this in mind I have explored how MInsmere has been subject to processes that manage the landscape and wildlife habitats against competing and sometimes contradictory pressures of both wildlife and human access.

What have you learned from the two photographers you looked at, plus any other photographers you sought inspiration from? How did they influence your work on this assignment?

With Dan Holdsworth I was impressed by his night-time photography. Free of people and traffic his images have an artificial emptiness to them. The long exposures creating stillness and an ambient mood of stillness.



Dan Holdsworth: California 2014 02


Tom Hunter’s work depicts people living on the fringes of society in East London. These seemingly disenfranchised folk are given legitimacy through Hunter’s work that reflects local stories and issues. He choses to mimic or impersonate the work of great painters from this history of fine art – see below


Tom Hunter: The Way Home



John Everett Millais: Ophleia


I can see how both Holdswoth and Hunter comment on a given location through their work. There is a consistency in their approach that draws together the images found in a series.

Strangely, when I started to take the photographs of my Square Mile my mind kept coming back to the work of Tom Hunter. In his “Life and Death in Hackney” there are some images of water and rich verdant vegetation and these struck a chord with me. In my series there is a photograph of fish that I took on a bit of whim. I wasn’t thinking seriously about the fish image when I took the shot and I didn’t think it would form part of my series. However, while quite different from the work of Hunter it feels like it has echoes of his with the water and intense colours. It passed my ‘facilitation’ test (see Thinking About Assignment 1) quite easily and the more I thought about Hunter’s use of colour the more I was drawn to include it in my final series for the Square Mile.


What was your technical approach to the assignment? And what techniques did you use to make it?

  • DSLR with a 24 to 120mm zoom. By preference I lean more towards shooting with a wide angle
  • Where possible I kept the ISO low but some darker locations required me to go to 400ISO. All shots were handheld and taken on ‘manual’
  • It was very bright sunny day on one of my visits and that sometimes meant shooting contra jour. On balance sunlight presented more advantages than disadvantages. When necessary I bracketed some shots.
  • I was on site fairly early in the morning for two reasons. 1. The light would be better for some shots and 2. There would be fewer people around. I didn’t want to emphasise people in my photographs as I was, in part, trying to address how the facilitation of visitors has influenced the reserve
  • Post production has not been a over complicated. I tended to compose in the viewfinder and so needed little cropping. Some images have had a slight adjustment of their levels. The most ‘produced’ is the image of the fish. This was sharpened; in levels the mid tones were darkened to lessen the glare on the water, both shadows and highlights were subtly tweaked; and the red and green channels of the hue/saturationenhanced a little.


What’s your opinion on how you did? Are you satisfied? Are there any areas you’d like to improve? 

Overall, I would say I am happy with the results. Technically, I don’t think I had any great problems, though some of the images taken in low light have a narrower depth of field than I anticipated. This was the first day out with a new camera and lens and while my preferred wide-angle shots may give a broad DoF it’s clearly not infinite. This is something I need to be mindful about in the future. One of the visits presented me with exceptionally strong, low autumn sunlight. Some photographs were enhanced by this while others suffered. This is another technical aspect that I need to address and find ways of over coming it or working with it to my advantage.

Am I satisfied? On one level yes. This is first time in a long time that I’ve had to actually think about presenting a series of photographs that attempt to represent something. I feel I have conceptualised my Square Mile well and gone on to say something visually about it that reflects my thoughts about it. Beyond that, however, I’m not entirely sure. Last month, when I enrolled on the FiP I said I felt like I’d started a journey but it’s one whose destination isn’t quite yet clear. I felt I lacked the ascetic and artistic vocabulary to express such feelings, to be able to self-critique, and I hope that with feedback from peers and my tutor on this first assignment I’ll be able to start developing these necessary artistic skills.


Square Mile – Contact Sheets





Preparation for Assignment 1

The FiP work book asked us to look at the work of two photographers: Dan Holdsworth and Tom Hunter. My initial reaction to both of them was a little guarded. It was easy to appreciate the technical merit in both and I could see how they used their work to reflect an impression of a given place. However, neither grabbed my attention – I simply didn’t warm to their work. That said these were my initial impressions but they were, in part, due to change later.

Below are some notes I made in my ‘sketch book’ having looked at the works of the two photographers.


Thinking About Assignment 1

I have been giving a lot of thought and attention to the subject matter for my first assignment – Square Mile. I understand the brief but forming a rationale for my approach has been a little tricky. The subject of my Square Mile is going to be the Royal Society for the Protection of Birds’ reserve at Minsmere. This place is very much a flagship for the RSPB and rightly so for it has a varied range of habitats in a small area and thus had a fantastic variety of wildlife. As a keen birdwatcher living close to Minsmere I spend, and have spent, a huge amount of time here. The relationship I have to it fits the Square Mile brief perfectly.

The difficulty I’ve had is due to the ambivalent relationship I have to the place and thus also to the RSPB. Minsmere is a very popular destination for a lot of people and families. This has increased considerably over the last three years due to the BBC hosting its Springwatch series from the reserve. But my interest in birds and wildlife is not always served when there are lots of people around. Being outdoors and watching birds for me at least does have a restorative effect. A sense of solitude and engagement with the natural world is a balm that soothes the stresses and strains that ever day work and life inflicts. When Minsmere is at its busiest it feels like a high street or shopping mall and not a place to experience the restorative effect of nature.

But I don’t want to produce a range of photographs that emphasise this sometimes negative aspect. The reason why so many people visit is because it is a wonderful place rich in wildlife, which is the reason I like to visit too. It would be cynical, parochial, and hypocritical to criticise the ‘bloody tourists’ when that’s exactly what I am! I don’t want to be seen as grumpy old man, though I may have my moments, I have a richer albeit ambivalent relationship to my RSPB Minsmere. So how do I reflect visually my favoured square mile? I pretty much instantly rejected the idea of producing a series of landscapes. That wouldn’t be what I wanted to say about the place. My relationship with it is more than admiration for any perceived natural beauty. The relationship to wildlife and birds transcends this. Photographing birds is not going to happen either. My visual relationship to birds doesn’t rest easily with conventional bird photography – looking at my experiments of photographing Gulls might help here. It was when reflecting about the role of the RSPB in the popularising Minsmere that my approach to assignment began to take form.

When I was a schoolboy birder about 40 years ago it wasn’t unusual for organisations like the RSPB to keep you out of their reserves. They were for the birds and not the public or even their own fee-paying members for that matter. What access was allowed was highly regulated and restricted. A limited number of permits were issued and these could be obtained by sending an application form through the postal system. Money is the driving force behind this democratisation of access. Greater footfall brings money: spent in the gift shop or the café. With this has come a broadening of the RSPB’s work. Nature conservation is a key function but it has also become part of the local tourism industry. Running Minsmere will involve a careful balance between creating and maintaining bird-friendly habitat and the encouraging and subsequent management of visitors.

So, it is this balance that has informed my photographic approach to the Square Mile. The people who run Minsmere have to ensure that visitors can engage with wildlife without disturbing or disrupting the thing they have come to see. How this balance is facilitated is central to my assignment

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